I have more than enough stuff pouring onto the pages of my notebook.
It is the trying to organise and rewrite and refine (Well, well another poem about diamonds just popped into my brain. (Look out for it in days to come.)) that takes me time. TIME!!!!
A funeral to attend today. A tangi, so tragic and so sad. What a lovely family to suffer such a loss. That is why death was featuring in the poem yesterday.
Today I have a poem I wrote 4 months ago. That was my first. I've always loved words. Someone challenged me then to write one. This week I am challenged to write more and publish them...
"Share and be damned" the messenger said...
Shroud
Cruising along on the bay,
eyes on a distant mark.
My ship under full sail.
A storm blows up aft, unseen.
Grey cloud decends,
A shroud enfolds me.
The wind whips through
the rigging.
Furling the sails
Waves crash about,
their peaks and troughs an attack.
I am overwhelmed
take cover
avoid the sting of salt spray
I run for shelter
seeking calm
cocoon myself
peek out
check for safety
keeping a weather eye.
Andrew Thompson
15/4/10
Ligar Bay
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